Writing to reach you

I joined a flaming forum recently. But part from the flaming section I also discovered a poetry section. So I thought to myself, "hey what the hell, I'll give it another try...." You can post stuff or join a thread where they post a picture and you write a poem about what you think you see... Here are my first few new stabs at poetry : Miscarriage (to Jeremy) State me as you see me, be me as I am. Crave from me the being that I just don't understand. Live me in the plenty, make me be a man. Stand with me in dreaming as in real you never can. Let us walk the silence, a frame by frame charade, a tasteless touch, unspoken look a memory of days. Young Goddess (a picture poem) Starstrangled eyes piercing red satin a daunting disguise of everything lost Kindled her life to furfil expectations the withering heights of the things that she must Craving a sense of divine revelation her nature it calls her back to a way She deems in their eyes she can't shake the passion for all that is life, it's there she will stay The forrest she roams to find absolution forgiveness not given to living or dead The wise trees now moan, bending and breaking creating a path she forever may tread. By the Sword In beats it comes flowing my life away, memories flashing and fading. A moment , an hour, a thought stretching years, a teardrop erasing desires and cravings. In beats you watch waning my life away, all we once shared now degrading. I gave it my all, but never enough a witness to all of my failure In beats I see fading your life away, a gaze edging far beyond border A soul cast it's chains, and now is set free, through ill will and wrath, by the sword now a savior. | posted by merc, 3:49 PM | 0 comments |